Friday, July 22, 2016

Stars In Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.5

Let's rewrite the verse
O, little flower vendor

'Twinkle, twinkle little little star'
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Yasmin Khan
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Khairul Ahsan 23 July 2016

I was deeply moved reading your poem, both by the poem itself and the picture of the little boy, a street vendor selling flowers to earn a livelihood. This picture is common in my country too, but the beautiful expression of your love for the boy touched me. Not many can express his/her emotion on small matters of our day to day life like this.

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Yasmin Khan 30 July 2016

Thank you for your kind comments.

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A wonderful poem with excellent human touch portraying intricacies of life. Well done Yasmeen Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Yasmin Khan 30 July 2016

Thank you for for nice words.

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Yasmin Khan

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