Saturday, March 3, 2012

Stars In The Night Comments

Rating: 4.6

I see the stars
in the night
When will they come
and be our light
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Dave Alan Walker
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Sandy Player 10 January 2013

very neat and thought provoking. the night has a thousand eyes indeed.

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Unwritten Soul 08 March 2012

This one should be rocketed to the sky as a new star, coz it shines my smile whenever i read it :) nice one Dave Alan Walker, my bro hahahaha :) _Unwritten SOul

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Von Klassique 06 March 2012

I love this...short, precise 'n' On-point!

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Little Wolf 05 March 2012

very good poem. Really made me think.

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Jinal Oswal 05 March 2012

Very simple poem, but a real sense of longing can be felt... Nice poem :)

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Miharbi S 04 March 2012

Great poem I realy enjoyed reading it!

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Lizzie O'neill 04 March 2012

This is beautiful...

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Sir Dave, This is a very wonderful poem, appreciating nature and forming a bond with its significance to the lives we live, great write! The_African_Son

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Kendra Swan 03 March 2012

Reading this poem makes me want to go sit out under the sky and look at the stars. its a very good poem.

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Harindhar Reddy 03 March 2012

Dear Walker! Your poem has full of natural light give us some light. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Though it is simple yet lucid it is! A red-carpet welcome to the poet to read the poem: Faraway From Maddening Crowd! (A Life Poem)

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Neela Nath Das 03 March 2012

The longing for light though of Stars is the keynote of the poem.More and more lights must get into your life to dispel the darkness.Always.

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Ramesh Katwal 03 March 2012

u hv written a bful poem Dave...n thanks for comment on my poem...

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Spiritual Seeker 03 March 2012

Starlight..moonlight...twilight...they all light our heart! Nice poem Dave!

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Wabi Sabi 03 March 2012

yes, Stars in the night tell us as if to do something right. Let's begin now and pass the torch.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

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