I see the stars
in the night
When will they come
and be our light
...
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This one should be rocketed to the sky as a new star, coz it shines my smile whenever i read it :) nice one Dave Alan Walker, my bro hahahaha :) _Unwritten SOul
Very simple poem, but a real sense of longing can be felt... Nice poem :)
Sir Dave, This is a very wonderful poem, appreciating nature and forming a bond with its significance to the lives we live, great write! The_African_Son
Reading this poem makes me want to go sit out under the sky and look at the stars. its a very good poem.
Dear Walker! Your poem has full of natural light give us some light. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Though it is simple yet lucid it is! A red-carpet welcome to the poet to read the poem: Faraway From Maddening Crowd! (A Life Poem)
The longing for light though of Stars is the keynote of the poem.More and more lights must get into your life to dispel the darkness.Always.
u hv written a bful poem Dave...n thanks for comment on my poem...
Starlight..moonlight...twilight...they all light our heart! Nice poem Dave!
yes, Stars in the night tell us as if to do something right. Let's begin now and pass the torch.
very neat and thought provoking. the night has a thousand eyes indeed.