Yesterday
For some time
I walked
Sat and talked
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A beautiful combination of obstacles and hardness of day and inspirations and hopes from dream. A beautiful poem, dear madam!
A great poem on being honest and truthful towards your inner being. One must never stop dreaming. A poem that inspires.
A determined heart and a hopeful mind, beautifully depicted using simple diction. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for sharing. X
In the same place! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
congratulations......nice poem with a simple and smooth diction....carries a positive attitude of life to go forward.thanks....nurul.
Congratulations, Jasbir, for having this selected as Member poem of the day for two years in a row on March 16!
Wow! I was not aware of this until you mentioned it. Thanks for your best wishes.
Don't stop dreaming. Success is dreaming and achieving it. Very nice. enjoyed thoroughly.Congrats.
A well texted and nicely thought-out poem. Remain enriched Jasbir.
Very well crafted with imagination profound.......I like the way it has been expressed so simply........Cong. for being selected as P.O.D....10
a poem of imagining that of better things to come? ............thoughtfully written Jasbir
Highly imaginative poem presented nicely. Dreaming makes one's hope. Beautiful. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
“But dreaming/I have not stopped.../Because dreaming/makes me hope/And I walk, sit and talk……” Pragmatic expression! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being chosen as POD!
Jasbir, such a heartwarming poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... a huge 10+++
The ups and downs of life. I think acceptance that this is the real circle of life.
Evidently there are dreams that elevate you and there are dreams that keep you going through the slumps.
Thanks, Denis, for commenting. Indeed, without dreams life will become like a huge, boring, sandy desert where nothing ever blooms...
Lovely. Poetic. Dreams are made of such enticing stuff. Really!