Monday, August 29, 2016

Stars Don't Twinkle Comments

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Everything sucks when you grow up
because you gain knowledge..
It's funny they call it gaining..
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courtney metcalf
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Bharati Nayak 12 September 2016

Your imagery of 'twinkling stars' with the deceptive world is really marvelous.What a child believed in his innocence falls apart as he grows up and experience the contrary.Stars don't twinkle merrily, but the they appear so because their far distance and the constant moving of thick atmospheric air.Powerful expression.Your pen has so much promise to reach a star.

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