Saturday, March 28, 2009

Stars Comments

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Take the time to look at the Stars in the sky,
They're the tears that we cry that light up at night;
They're the ones we mourn, the ones we aspire to,
We've learnt that they're gases, but I say they're fire too.
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Patryk Krzywon
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Scarlette Romero 21 April 2009

Very nice Rhyme very catching.andi give you a ten.

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Very nice rhyme.I wish our night sky would clear up so we can see them again.I gave you a ten.

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Patryk Krzywon

Patryk Krzywon

Mikolow, Silesia
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