Stars Comments

tbh rebecca r kinda took the word right out of my mouth. this is a really beautiful poem. it is nice just to stop and look up on a clear night to see the slight twinkles of light that frame the world skies.

Excellent poem, I feel like you are a twin soul, you take the time to appreciate the beauty nature has to offer, and that is a rare thing...10+ marks! : D

cute! :) full of awesomest <-not a word but you know what i mean: D great job!

Nice descriptions of stars, Tobias. Sincerely, Paige

i like this one. love alwas bree

A wonderful poem here. Truly Great! Keep posting more poems!

This is a very good poem about the stars and their true form, according to Tobias Gray.: P This poem says a lot, and is a good tribute to them. There is one error though, and that is in the first stanza, in the 4th line. You have 'there' and it should be 'their'. But I can find nothing wrong with this poem, except that one mistake. Thank you for sharing, Tobias. WRITE ON! ! ! ! ! Love & hugs, Barbara