Friday, April 29, 2005

Stars Comments

Rating: 2.8

Blemishes on the night’s face
Glowing brighter with each passing hour.
With each iridescent wish
And each shining prayer.
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Cassandra Helen
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Jessica H 19 October 2005

I liked this poem the best out of the three of yours I read. I was just a little confused by the last line. 'The night is clean again.' I thought the stars were a blemish on the night's face?

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Casey Rock 14 July 2005

I enjoyed 'Mirrors' and the next two were even better! Keep submitting.

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