Stars Comments
The stars adorn the heaven at night,
They beautify with gleaming light
The sky of dismal hue;
They shiver in the icy cold,
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Beautiful poem and a nice articulation of thoughts on the stars shining in the sky carrying a message of peace for man. Thanks. I quote: Behold these messengers of peace! Belligerent man, your fighting cease, Look heavenward; stars do not fight,
A beautiful poem with a great message. Liked it. Like the stars we too should live in peace and harmony to make this earth a better place.Thanks for sharing.
David, I love your rhyme scheme here. Each verse starts off with a couplet (AA) followed by BCCB. In verse three, the BB is not true rhyme, but a very nice assonance. Very pleasing. Congratulations for having it selected as Member Poem of the Day!
Gleaming thoughts, splendidly knitted on a poetic canvas. Soothes one's heart miraculously.
Splendid work. Thanks for sharing the beautiful composition, David
David, really enjoyed reading this poem. Such wonderful images and brilliantly constucted, just right. Often pieces like this are overdone but you've done a great job here.
A really great poem David, an excellent write. A beautiful story very well told, and so inspiring. Lovely! Love Ernestine XXX
I think that this is a beautifully written poem. Also, I think that you have a lot of talent when writing. Keep up the excellent work!
Very soothing and gentile with wonderful imagery. A wonderful piece. 10 all the way!
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7/31/2025 3:29:23 PM # 1.0.0
The most beautiful poem I have come across about stars. and these lovely creations of God do have a great message for mankind. Great imagery.lovely writ. Congratulations on being the poet of the Day.