Monday, January 13, 2014

Starry Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a starry moonless night
A beautiful bird took flight
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Lento Maez
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Khairul Ahsan 17 January 2014

This is a wonderful poem - a symphony of harmony and a harmonious symphony! 10/10. I can very well relate these two couplets: 'On a starry moonless night A beautiful bird took flight' and - 'In harmony their hearts took flight Causing a starry moon filled night'. And... 'To echo harmonies far and wide While the heavens beamed with pride.' - are appropriate lines for summing up! Thanks for your comments on my poem 'Of Birds And Men'.

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Stephen Katona 15 January 2014

Enchanting. You have created words to adorn our walls.

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Lorraine Colon 14 January 2014

Starry nights are my favorite. Wonderful things happen under the stars. Beautiful poem.

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Lyn Paul 13 January 2014

Poetic beauty in your Starry Night

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Tyson Mwanza 13 January 2014

Lento! This poem is simply exquisite, of that i'll be very explicit.!

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