Monday, November 11, 2013

Starry Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let the moment be still in the
starry night.
let the indulgence of this moment
be as quiet and secret as the
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Pradip Dasgupta
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Usman Hanif 23 November 2013

I feel like i am sitting in silence in a peaceful room observing every single detail around me. Like savoring the peacefulness around. Although my tempo of peace was disrupted from the line and the line below cricket but it is a beautiful piece. Keep up! :)

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Valsa George 17 November 2013

Enjoyed the description of this serene, silent Night lit with stars and mildly disturbed by the sound of crickets! The peaceful sleep in the lap of Nature on a bed of grass is a delightful experience!

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Ebi Robert 15 November 2013

you know what i love most about this work? the diction...its beautiful

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Hazel Durham 15 November 2013

Dancing words that are lit by the wonder of the stars at night drawing inspiration from nature's rich abundance! Shimmering with impact of the mystique of the stars in all their splendour! Excellent write!

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Bolah Lawal 15 November 2013

Simply beautiful, highly rhythmic....well done!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 November 2013

While reading a song of Boney M came in my mind See the stars come joining down frm the sky loved to read beautiful

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Unwritten Soul 13 November 2013

The title reminds me the painting by Vincent van Gogh..definitely stars are things that defined me most...my inspiration all the time..as much moonlight shine does..I like the sensitivity scene you shared especially laying on the soft green grass and watching the blinking shine....it so beautiful to imagine that, your words also comforting.Keep for the good words_Soul

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