To dream
What for
Disappointment on hold
Life unfolds
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Fantastic! :) And so easy for me to relate to. Your analogy was so special.
I knew I would love Starry Night by the title. You have written it with simply beautiful imagery and it flows like magic. 'Another star falls on my lap' did it for me. Top marks Karin Anderson
Beautiful piece! Imagery matches the tone of the poem perfectly! So easy to read as well. Thanks, roshni.
Beautiful, Sonya. And so genuine. Your last stanza lingers in the mind. Warm regards, Sandra
Sometimes you reach for the stars and you only need to touch the special one for heaven to open. A very sad write of broken dreams..........
amazing poem you have here Sonya! I love it!