Saturday, April 18, 2009

# Starry Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

To dream
What for
Disappointment on hold
Life unfolds
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Sonya Florentino
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Estrella Baldemosa 26 May 2009

amazing poem you have here Sonya! I love it!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

what a brilliant modern writing! van Gogh on words! ! !

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Fantastic! :) And so easy for me to relate to. Your analogy was so special.

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I knew I would love Starry Night by the title. You have written it with simply beautiful imagery and it flows like magic. 'Another star falls on my lap' did it for me. Top marks Karin Anderson

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Roshni D'Souza 25 April 2009

Beautiful piece! Imagery matches the tone of the poem perfectly! So easy to read as well. Thanks, roshni.

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Sandra Fowler 21 April 2009

Beautiful, Sonya. And so genuine. Your last stanza lingers in the mind. Warm regards, Sandra

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Laurie Hill 19 April 2009

Sometimes you reach for the stars and you only need to touch the special one for heaven to open. A very sad write of broken dreams..........

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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