Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Starry Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I gazed up at you all night
It's that I felt as if you were my only friend
When I fell out of it
I came to you to make it better
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britt jack
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David Sabo 27 December 2009

I like the way you write, very melodic.

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Shekhar Joshi 07 July 2009

beautiful one................sweet but supposedly impossible longing........... nicely written...... ;)

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 07 July 2009

So beautiful. Your verses flow with galactic bliss and the words take one to flight.

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