Thursday, October 31, 2013

Starry Eyes Comments

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Starry eyes shining bright, like the soft-lit moon on a cloudless night,
I pray on the stars and all of heaven, that I be with her, tonight.
Her graceful walk, her radiant skin, her head of gold, that pulls me in,
Her brown eyes, her charming grin, her pure heart, I want to win.
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Ashutosh Pandey
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Jack Growden 31 October 2013

Ash, this poem makes me excited...

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Shraddha The Poetess 31 October 2013

nice one.......rhythem is good................

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