Friday, July 15, 2011

Starring A Speck Of Light Comments

Rating: 4.8

Weigh the memory never to be
Cold wind wild in the sky of mind
Joy sowed seeds in the field of time
And now paddies burst with light green dreams
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Abhay Vignesh Liginlal
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Paul Abucean 19 August 2011

Very meaningful and carefully crafted. 'Speak the language known to few', that is exactly what (your) poetry is about. Keep it up, Abhay!

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Wendy Thopliss 18 July 2011

A very nice poem Abhay, well written. Thanks for the invite.

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Sasikala Kamandula 16 July 2011

rich with fair imagery, wonderful work friend!

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Abdallah Gamal 16 July 2011

Wo0o0o0o0o0o0w nice poem with great imagination and beautiful metaphors with a little words u make a pic. full of great imagination, congratulations rated 10+++

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Urshula Davis 15 July 2011

Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! This is beautiful!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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