Weigh the memory never to be
Cold wind wild in the sky of mind
Joy sowed seeds in the field of time
And now paddies burst with light green dreams
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Wo0o0o0o0o0o0w nice poem with great imagination and beautiful metaphors with a little words u make a pic. full of great imagination, congratulations rated 10+++
Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal
Very meaningful and carefully crafted. 'Speak the language known to few', that is exactly what (your) poetry is about. Keep it up, Abhay!