Saturday, August 2, 2008

Starlight Falls Upon The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.5

Starlight falls upon the sky, as my imagination wanders towards your city.
In my minds eye I can see the skyline, all the twinkling lights.
Like a bird on the wind I travel, searching for your bright eyes.
A smile cascades across my face as I see you, if only for a brief moment.
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Rachel The Hair Guru
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

This is very clear and creative. The writer does a wonderful job for the reader. Neverletting them stray. GW62

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