Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Starlight Comments

Rating: 4.6

Up to the sky
I'm just only a little star
My faint color seen from a far
Loyal to love the night
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2018

I am just a little star when each of you stick with me It makes me feel like a biggest one Each wish goes through this night sending me more stunning light Beautiful me, I gain intense bright But the shine is our story In a big space of glory......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem nicely executed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2018

Little stars enlight the sky in night and attract the eyes of the people. Though a star is little yet it has much qualities. This poem signifies the higher quality in a tiny cell. You have beautifully inscribed this poem that anybody may appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.10

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Tom Allport 30 September 2017

an enlightening and uplifting poem that would bring a smile to the darkest place? .................well written US

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Simone Inez Harriman 12 September 2017

Soul..your heart and sincerity is in the openness and honesty in your words that you write straight from your heart. This one goes straight to my favorites.10+++++++

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Frank James Davis 20 April 2013

The utter sincerity of your poetic humility is quite charming; your art, enchanting. Both you, and your work, Soul, are easy to like.

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Stefanie Fontker 15 August 2011

A great poem. I doubt an ugly star exists, not in the beautiful sky, and not in your beautiful poetry.

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 August 2011

Well drafted poem.Thoughtful.Do read my new one 'AN APPLE' based on reality and mythology connected to a fruit.I hope my harvest satisfies your choice if u love eat apples.I do not know if an apple a day keeps the doctor away as i myself do not eat everyday apple.But i hope you will enjoy this poem of mine.Good luck and keep up the good work.

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Miroslava Odalovic 07 August 2011

For some reason your poems always remind me that being happy is both a choice and a gift. And I heard Moby singing in my head 'We're all made of stars' :) :) :) and I see it's good :)

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Whispering Rose 03 August 2011

what a lovely piece of your soul....i loved thsi line 'I could be your fallen star'...friends are life falling stars, they make all our wishes of true friendship come to life

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Hans Vr 22 July 2011

This poem is shining as a bright star on Poem Hunter. Very well written. The humility, all the emotion, so beautiful Poetry that may be still read by the next three generations

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Rekha Mandagere 15 July 2011

This idol is small but fame is tall! Let this little pole star keep shining with greater intensity and love for humanity forever! Lovely poem. I give 10++++++ to the power of 'n' to this.

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Shadow Girl 13 July 2011

beautiful..i agree with gg happy b'day

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hey, now i have tear, George have tear running down his beak, lol. lol bro, hope your havin a good day, paint the stars, lil soul

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