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Thursday, January 21, 2010

Starlight. Comments

Rating: ★4.0

As you lean down to kiss me, you cant see what your missing.
Its hard to know of your every move.
Swimming through an endless sky,
I watch as you pass by.
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Mae Bonnin

swimming

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Matt Mooney 13 May 2010

A poem that's full of light and I like it.. Could you explain the metaphor of the star filling a cup?

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Jean Dament 25 January 2010

I like how you incorporated the plight of humans with the starlight looking on. Nicely done. Another poem that flows naturally. Spiritsong

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Leah Ayliffe 21 January 2010

Once again; BEAUTIFUL love your writing style

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