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Line 4 needs some adjustment e.g. 'There are people all around me' or 'They are all around me...'

Funny, no matter who I heard talking....I was sure they were making fun of me. Then one day somebody said 'What makes you think you are SO important that EVERYONE is thinking about you? ' Then I realized I could just relax and be myself cause nobody really was making fun. Your poems are such a cleansing it seems. I'm so glad to read them. Sincerely, mary