Tuesday, March 14, 2023

.....Staring Out The Window..... Comments

Rating: 4.9

............sitting here in the stillness
.............................staring
...............staring out the window
...at darkness my friend and my foe.
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Susan Williams
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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 June 2023

OF COURSE, dear SUSAN, your choices do work for us, sure, absolutely. Cobgratulations you are now on number THREE, dear Susan, I am very happy for you

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Today this poem ranks #03 in the list of Best Poems Of Members. Congratulations, Susie. All the best..

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David Wood 17 June 2023

I know this place well, I go there many times yet I can't wait to leave it, but ut keeps drawing me back. Congratulations on getting to number 3 in the Best Member Poems list.

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Staring out of the window, deliberately

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Real poetry, a treasure for those who love good poetry.

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I made a re today to enjoy the poem once again.

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This poem should be ranked Number One, by all means. But, dear PoemHunter, what are you doing to really talented poets? ? ?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 June 2023

Congratulations dear Susan, your gorgeous poem is this morning on number 5. of The Best Member Poems.Happy to revisit this brilliant poem, it touches my heart. God's Blessings in Abundance, dear Susan

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Sylvia, good to see you back

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As I watch the bleeding heart in this poem, my heart bleeds too. May I invite you, Susie, to read my/your poem "NEVER TO RETURN"…

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#04 today

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" yes they are gone ......these dark minutes never to return "…. Are we relieved? NO! ! ! they are replaced by darker ones! they bang us like the waves in an ocean his the sandy coast devours it….nothing remains…except gloom…

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A heartful of woes poured out in a few lines of burning poetry like flaming lava…

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Song of a heavy heart….

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Inimitable, right from the heart

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It is a wonder to see how she translates her extreme sadness and pain into such wonderful poetry. I adore this poem.

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Dear poets, if you want to find genuine talent, read the poems of Susan Williams

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Susan, this poem tears the readers' hearts open….and spills our its peace and calm. Disquiet pervades..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 June 2023

It's my pleasure to revisit this wonderful poem.... thoughtfully written

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"....to down my life burn" (to burn down my life) …extraordinary brilliance in poesy

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This profound poem maintains its position at #05.

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