Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Staring Into Darkness Comments

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Staring into darkness
What do my eyes behold?
A glimpse into the world
Of many secrets untold.
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Bhavya Kaman
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Hazel Durham 13 January 2019

I love the rhythm and flow of this uplifting and brilliant write

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Shambhu Dan Mehru 18 March 2012

Good poem, good philosophy.liked it.

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Ajay Seshadri 07 March 2012

This poem is very profound. Without darkness there is no light.

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Vijayalakshmi Manien 06 March 2012

nice, just a suggestion put some rhyming in it to mack it catchy

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Sagar Shelar 06 March 2012

Really nice poem. I like it.

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Bhavya Kaman

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