Monday, May 5, 2014

Stargazing Comments

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In my dreams you seemed so far away
as
The night turned to day in the blink of your eye
Words became the actions dismissed by the breath you took in front of me
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Kewayne Wadley
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Anita Khelawan 16 February 2016

How it ignites a dream within a dream Prayers baptized in the tears of your cry Eyes that seemed awake in the dream of your stare.... i can only hope that one day i can write as good as your do... sigh :)

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Sofia Kioroglou 05 December 2015

Lovely write! Sweet, tender and coming from the soul!

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Colleen Courtney 05 May 2014

Wow. A very beautiful, soul written poem. Very well written!

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Susan Lacovara 05 May 2014

What a lovely write! There is a great abundance of affection in your penned words as you paint a beautiful night. PEACE

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Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Groton, Connecticutt
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