Thursday, June 6, 2013

Stargazer Comments

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I am a stargazer
I Fixed my eyes to look up...
People may say it’s an ambition
But for me...it’s a way to survive
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Annette Liliann
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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2013

Oh this is a very nice poem. You are not alone, I am also a star gazer. It soothes me doing so. Excellent expression of your mood.

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Patricia Grantham 18 July 2013

Keep looking up to realize your dreams. It is a whole lot better than looking down. The love that is desired will come in time. A lovely write.

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Nice poem I like how u relate the stars to a person and express that universal truth of the desire within people to find their soulmates nicely written.

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Majida Abdul Latif 07 June 2013

your poem is so lovely keep going forward

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