Starfighter Comments

This is a magnificient write, my friend. The rhyme, the meter, the story, the lesson, everything about it is great. I loved this verse and it is a truth that the world needs to understand: God remains unimpressed with men self-obsessed, though we make for ourselves quite a name. We just can’t outfight God, the truth and the right And have only ourselves to blame. Best wishes, my friend. A 10+ from me Richard