Saturday, October 28, 2006

Stare Me Down! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Table width seperation,
The sassy voice, all fire an' brimstone,
The innate entanglement of leather n' lace,
The cocky catialion, multi-colour tare,
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Geoff Warden
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Original Unknown Girl 02 November 2006

Geoff.... would hate to have a staring contest with you on this one! You've really got it sewn up here, very sensual.... can picture the image right away! Great write again... you're on a roll! HG: -)

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M S 31 October 2006

BLINK... whew, one of your better ones for sure. I like how the intensity of the last line increases with each vere and the whole interplay between the characters. I'd have a hard time playing poker with you, G. Cheers, Masha PS watch the spelling

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 October 2006

SIR GEOFF>>>Fine penning, indeed....BRING ON THE STARE ..........................................................BRING ON THE TEN! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F j R}

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Geoff Warden

Geoff Warden

London Ontario Canada
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