Stardust Comments

very endearing endeavor. I loved the mystical feel of your words. blissful write.

Absolutely lovely. I enjoyed the read, your imagery is wonderful...Marianna Jo Arolin

Really good imagery in this, and even better flow. nice!

You have the natural gift of rhyming and beautiful imagery conveys the thoughts all the way through.I know it's a sad poem but it's happy one when the soul sings.*****

Loved it. Great word choice. amazing I'm speechless.

Smashing! ! ! another superb write and another superb read. Applause my friend. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! using the stardust made it so magically fantastical

excellent poem sir! good job! !

I like this poem, it's written in the neo-Romantic style if I'm not mistaken. Well done!

Im really glad you asked me to read your poetry, i like it very much. The romance here is terrific, and i loved the metaphores you used. Keep it up! Awesome imagry by the way.

I can see a romantic theme here, but again, this seems very forced to me. You write your poetry like William Shakespeare, and the other poets of his time. For old fashioned poetry it does have a nice message, but again is written in form. Today's poetry should have no form, as long as it tells a message from the heart and soul, not the mind. The two poems I have read were written from the mind, not the heart, because you were thinking about making them rhyme. Don't think poetry, just write as it comes into your head, because if you have think about a poem before you write it, then it isn't poetry but a forced writing from a preconceived thought. Anyway I can only give this and 8 again, because of its message. Barbara

When you asked me to read your poem i wasn't sure what it would be like... but i read it. and i LOVED it! this is very very romantic.

So very romantic..it takes the heart away....Nicely written & expressed.

its good i like ur poem. thanx for sharing it.

Quite romantic, it touches the Heart softly. Definitely a 10

Quite an unexpected approach. Usually the person is lamenting the loss of someone loved. Here you treasure the presciousness of the experience and know that this won't be the last time of such love. You hold forth a hopeful world full of posibilities. You use some nice imagery to express your feelings - general in the beginning and then more particular towards the end. Giving and receiving, sharing and remembering, enriching our lives. A powerful message.

A poem with a vision of loveliness! A ten's not enough, for a write, as this! ! *10plus*! ! A Great read my friend, a pleasure as always! ! Best regards, Thad

'I shall surely find another To replace this love I miss...' ......................... Very beautifully G.W., You are assured of that, in other to an entertainment will find true to feeling? Sincerely, Tsira

Thanks for great thoughts, charles garcia

A great heartfelt poem of love! Flawlessly expressed, Thanks for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best regards: Friend Thad