Stardust Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Stardust

Rating: 4.9


She put stardust on my window.
Piercing love beams through my eyes.
She made rainbows of the raindrops,
Stardust colors in disguise..

She knew answers to the questions,
That have since departed me.
She knew reasons for my being,
When my reasons ceased to be.

She's the one that was outstanding,
When I faltered just a bit.
She's the image through my vision,
And the mold to which I fit.

I shall surely find another
To replace this love I miss.
And I'll know her by the stardust
In my eyes each time we kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 21 July 2008

Smashing! ! ! another superb write and another superb read. Applause my friend. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! using the stardust made it so magically fantastical

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Ozzy Govea 21 June 2008

excellent poem sir! good job! !

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Liandra Schoot 02 June 2008

I like this poem, it's written in the neo-Romantic style if I'm not mistaken. Well done!

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Im really glad you asked me to read your poetry, i like it very much. The romance here is terrific, and i loved the metaphores you used. Keep it up! Awesome imagry by the way.

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

very endearing endeavor. I loved the mystical feel of your words. blissful write.

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Marianna Jo Arolin 28 September 2008

Absolutely lovely. I enjoyed the read, your imagery is wonderful...Marianna Jo Arolin

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Lauren Watkins 22 September 2008

Really good imagery in this, and even better flow. nice!

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You have the natural gift of rhyming and beautiful imagery conveys the thoughts all the way through.I know it's a sad poem but it's happy one when the soul sings.*****

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Sierra Monique 30 July 2008

Loved it. Great word choice. amazing I'm speechless.

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