She put stardust on my window.
Piercing love beams through my eyes.
She made rainbows of the raindrops,
Stardust colors in disguise..
She knew answers to the questions,
That have since departed me.
She knew reasons for my being,
When my reasons ceased to be.
She's the one that was outstanding,
When I faltered just a bit.
She's the image through my vision,
And the mold to which I fit.
I shall surely find another
To replace this love I miss.
And I'll know her by the stardust
In my eyes each time we kiss.
I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! using the stardust made it so magically fantastical
I like this poem, it's written in the neo-Romantic style if I'm not mistaken. Well done!
Im really glad you asked me to read your poetry, i like it very much. The romance here is terrific, and i loved the metaphores you used. Keep it up! Awesome imagry by the way.
very endearing endeavor. I loved the mystical feel of your words. blissful write.
Absolutely lovely. I enjoyed the read, your imagery is wonderful...Marianna Jo Arolin
You have the natural gift of rhyming and beautiful imagery conveys the thoughts all the way through.I know it's a sad poem but it's happy one when the soul sings.*****
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Smashing! ! ! another superb write and another superb read. Applause my friend. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX