Thursday, November 10, 2011

Stardom Or Boredom! A Lonely Red Bird Flies In My Natural Kingdom! Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am eight and twenty, a lonely rose – no one close to sit with;
Here are no companions nor kin and kith, I live in lonely myth!
Sitting in the empty hall by myself at the day dawn in the white;
I feel awful – awful beyond all – crying gently dusk in the night.
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Harindhar Reddy
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Unwritten Soul 10 November 2011

'Harindhar style' i can see clearly here very well...the way you write and the pull of the story, shape of emotion is real you..Perfect art! There's a lot of nice lines i really like..i smile for your playful words, it amazing and interesting...you not only try to create atmosphere but also constructing music plane in your poems....that's the best things you always do and i call it as Harindhar style hahaha :) _Unwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for your artistic review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for your artistic review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Jacqui Broad 10 November 2011

A solo bird beats the lonely drum... Your poetry are so musical. I like your style very much...

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

I'm grateful for your stylish review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Crimson Love 10 November 2011

The angst of being lonely, we all feel it at times. 'I am eight and twenty, a lonely rose – no one close to sit with; Here are no companions nor kin and kith, I live in lonely myth! ' Truly amazing!

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Hmm yet another impressive review by you.. 🙏🙏👍👍

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