Monday, May 4, 2015

Star's Comments

Rating: 2.5

star's in the sky
star's are different
i see them
people are star's
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Brenda Fetty
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Allen Campbell 14 May 2015

it a beautiful poem and you sould write some more

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Kim Barney 04 May 2015

Nice poem, but get rid of all those apostrophes. None of them should be there. Trust me. I used to be an English teacher. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 04 May 2015

Our family should be our stars. Thanks for sharing, Brenda Peace

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Reva Fetty 04 May 2015

i really like this poem.

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