Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Star Crossed Lovers Comments

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Oh, darling hold my hand.
Take me to a rule free land.
Stay close at my side and never part.
You, my love, have the key to my heart.
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Crystal Pierce
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Bri Edwards 22 October 2017

favorite line so far: Life like that just wouldn't be. for darling you're love is the best.............your..........minus one point! ! ! Tomorrow will meet at the edge of town, but as for now think of me when your head you lay down. ...ha ha! you managed to get lay, not lie; many people would incorrectly use lie. [and you 'got' your this time. hee-hee] BUT i think you 'want' we'll/we will/shall, not well. so, are you drum general yet? ! bri :) oh, btw, the poem is GREAT. very nice job. to MyPoemList it goes. So, .....................IS THERE a 'love/lover' in your life, young lady? i won't tell. :)

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