Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Star Chat......... Comments

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It's sparkling inside as part of life
Lazy shadows are in queue
Liveliness is pursuing
To cherish the gloomy life on earth
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SALINI NAIR
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Valsa George 26 October 2014

All the dreams were washed-out Glee of life is lacking Numbness flock as routine Glitter in eyes thus conquered Gather to pity on the life on earth A gloomy picture of life!

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 October 2014

Beautiful poem Salini. Stars too speaks in silence. Fantastic lines.... May be there to never depart senses To glitter in the depth of shadows Here to conquest in depth of eyes A silent dictator of my life Glimpse the summit with some sobs Loved reading each lines...

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Soulful Heart 23 October 2014

nice poem.....shades of gloomy destinef facts....

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Akhtar Jawad 22 October 2014

Nothing is static, nothing is silent, every thing in this universe is moving and talking. Savita can see and hear emotions of exposing and talkative Godess of nature, apparently a silent dictator.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 October 2014

It's rational mind that can comprehend the language of stars......a bit philosophical though it is yet very well composed.............

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