Star Boy Comments

wow, good poem pia well done

Excellent poem Pia! ! ! !

Excellent poem Pia! ! ! !

Excellent poem Pia, this is like an addiction, just can't let Star boy go. Also like the cure for an addiction we just have to find something else to take the place of Star boy, therefore slowly allowing one to let go. Well done Pia.--Melvina--

Wonderful. I feel as though you know Star better than Star knows you.

AMAZING PIECE OF FINE ART! WELL DONE PIA WHAT A STAR! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! LOVE duncan X

Excellent! Star belongs to the mysterious sky. And a grasshopper cannot fly so high?

Very beautiful! ! So many things keep us alone, is that independence? We need love but for some reason it is so hard to find and to keep.

...must have been written by a star girl

I like the first line and the haunting addiction, the inability of the woman to let go of a wanderer a dreamer, as you have so eloquently expressed in this poem.

this haiku inspired by your lines: valentine roses/she looks for the name/that really matters