Tuesday, December 18, 2012

Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

I scarce could see the rainbow's hue
Through teardrops in my eyes
Nor hear the skylark singing sweet
In soft and sapphire skies
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Valerie Dohren
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Dee Corpolongo 26 December 2012

This is yet another beautiful poem about the heavens wonderous sites, and it is very enjoyable. Hope your holidays are happy ones, and a wish for a Happy New Year with {{{hugs}}}! ! !

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G Sweeney 26 December 2012

very very beautiful! ! Happy New Year! A poem to cherish.. Gayle

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Stevie Taite 24 December 2012

Happy Christmas and all the very best for 2013! X x x x x x x x x beautiful and flawless piece as usually!

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A starry night and an all seeing eye! A good piece of timely writing though the title I think, could have been longer still.....

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Kelvin Owusu 24 December 2012

Merry Christmas to you to and a Happy New Year, a great poem beautifully written like always

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Hazel Durham 23 December 2012

A very uplifting, optimistic poem so beautifully written! I wish you a very Happy Christmas and New Year!

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Om Chawla 23 December 2012

Tear filled eyes enthused by the distant glow of hope, dispelling gloom and stirring the soul to seek divine benevolence for all humanity. Noble thoughts wonderfully expressed. There is an uncommon eloquence in whatever you write. Admirable. Wishing you very best for the coming season and new year.

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Joseph Anderson 22 December 2012

May your guiding star ever shine for you and yours through the coming year.The support is highly deserved. Hang on to your muse

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Smoky Hoss 22 December 2012

I love your rhymes, beautiful and spot-on perfect, everyone. Your work, those wonder of words, never ceases to amaze me. You are a brilliant writer.

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Hans Vr 22 December 2012

This poem is touching, especially around this time ofthe year. The message is so clear and full of wisdom. Excellent, Valerie

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Red O'mara 22 December 2012

Lovely poem, Val. Merry Christmas.

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Owain Glyn 22 December 2012

Well captured, clean flow. Good thoughts to you this season.

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Dave Walker 20 December 2012

A very beautiful and fantastic poem.

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Valsa George 20 December 2012

A great poem Valerie! All Greetings of the joyous season and a wonderful New Year ahead! !

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Kevin Halls 19 December 2012

Your a star yourself Val. Look forward to more soon. Have a good Christmas-ho ho ho! And a prosperous and happy poetic new year!

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Nader Baheri 19 December 2012

merry christmas.well written about christmas.~nb

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Paul Brookes 18 December 2012

Lovely poem for Christmas. Have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year: O) Paul

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Heather Wilson 18 December 2012

Another wonderful poem Val, a star to shine on all humanity, so beautiful, a fantastc write Happy Christmas and New Year to you also.

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Lyn Paul 18 December 2012

You are a Star Valerie, what you give to others is truly inspiring, warm and full of love. thank you

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