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I love it! Good. But It could was better.... Thank u

salam dear mehraneh nice to meet you very nice poetry goodluck

nice and cool.in the cleverly way you have shown what's going on in our country.but why not more writing instead of translation...? ? ?

very nice, well done. I would be grateful if you could let me have your commments on my poems as well. keep up your good work. regards, Samaneh Nazerian (SN)

The best arranging of emotions with high fluctuating codes of ethics and great vision of our country...well done

Good write Mehraneh, a strong voice arrowing the air to be heard. No matter how deep it was never get drown and for a star to bright at darkest space it will always high no matter what. They can deny the presence of light but they totally blind if they are not with it...keep writing Meharaneh! and thanks for inviting_Unwritten Soul

Try to find a way and never smile in 9th Dey! you know a lot of things and feel many thing its good, but try focus on a special things that is believable for foreigners not for Persian because for us its our every day life.

A pessimistic note is had throughout the poem. A moneymonger is mentioned here who only thinks of him being a strict self centred person ignoring other. T he speaker (poet) is badly victimized by this selfish person.The poem is a well composed piece.

Great job. Make no mistake, you are quite talented in poetry. Your only enemy is lack of self-confidence, so don't ever let it get the better of you. Keep up writing poems of your own. Translation is good, especially for making the world familiar with our great culture, but speaking your own mind and writing your own poetry is something else. Let your powerful feelings overflow (as Wordsworth suggests) and the true magic of poetry will happen. Good luck.

Mehrahneh, i love reading poems by people like you who reach out at random to people like me just hoping to find an ear, a person who will listen to your voice in the sky, the ether, the vast expanse of the internet. Hello! I love your poem. The English grammar is not great but the meaning is greater than the lack of grammar and that is more important to me. Well written and keep writing. I know from my first poem how good it it feels to have a positive response. You have earned this one for a great poem.

Good work to build on

who says you are not a poet.this is the work of a poet in the making.very nice.keep inking mehraneh.

Dear Poet, I am specifically calling you a poet because you are feeling humble to call yourself a poet in the poem. To be different is a quality of human. If everything is common the beauty in the world will extinguish like a rose plant in a desert. your poem is thought provoking and the central idea of a poem is to generte thoughts in the mind of reader. congrats.

yes.... the world will treat u wrong and thk you crazy for being different... but thats what were made to be is different... cuz if we were like everyone else we would be unhappy.... insanitys alright if your fighting for what you believe instead of giving in to what others believe... i respect u for this... i love this poem and for ur courage to be different and not like the world.... this is lovely

A very good poem: D

It's a good poem! ! ! keep up the good work! !

edit n remove the statement from your profile that you are not a poet...certainly you are a good poet...rhetorical qs give a lively conversation touch to the poem...good...

the rhythm is as unparallel as thoughts assembled here

your poem has a good rhyme and strong meaning. I think you`ll be a good poet. Every poet writes his or her soul thoughts to introduce the world around us

9ice.luv dat keep dat tp