Saturday, December 28, 2019

Standing On The Sill Of Dead Window Comments

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No tranquility in the morning breeze
No serenity in the rising sun
No romanticism I find in the drizzling
No love of colors wraps my heart in the brightest moon
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 January 2020

Now venomous snake is crawling on the living paths Democracy is now hugging the hidden ghost rider of imperialism Religion is killing the independence of thoughtful conscientious humanity Poisonous evaporation of living breaths are ravishing all over the world. wonder fully you are portraying the facts of life now......... very fine poem. dear Mahtab. your pen is very powerful. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 December 2019

Magnificently crafted in sublimity......10+++

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