Standing On The Seashore Comments

What a marvellous poem! Early morning sunshine is spell binding! A mother's thousand kisses for her beloved child. You made my morning, dear Indira Madam! .........100

You have noticed a loving privacy and noticed the seashore. A beautiful vista which is vast and incredible amazingly motivates mind. This is interestingly penned.

Excited my anxiety threw flying kisses As by speed post to the new born That a happy wind took themfast Each kiss singing birth day cheers Ah, playing that prince golden In hide and seek with my kisses.....touching expression. It is really a beautiful poem having nice execution.10

Articulate poem, I quote my fav lines 10+++ A beautiful vista vast, incredible Inviting and so much tempting To embrace...but impracticable Before I could do anything Born the golden prince enticing

Early in the morning, staying by the seaside in perfect tranquillity, watching the sunrise is beautifully transferred into a lovely poem. Here I find the delight of a mother looking into the face of the newborn with overwhelming love. It is always a marvelous spectacle to watch the sun emerging from the point where the sea touches the horizon.