Monday, December 26, 2005

Standing In The Shower Comments

Rating: 4.8

Standing in the scalding shower
How I soak oblivious to skin
Flaking off me washing down the gurgling drain
And bones melting inside my heated body
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Linda Hepner
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Chuck Audette 01 February 2006

A wonderful rite, the daily shower. Your language is flowing powerfully here. I have a version, too, 'cold fall morning', if you'd like to pull the curtain and compare (oh, sorry, that sounded rather dirty) . -chuck

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