Friday, September 26, 2014

Standing Close To An Eucalyptus Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

After many years of separation,
I was once again standing,
to feel the fragrance,
of my loving sweet heart.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Sarmad Mirza 01 October 2014

Awesome one hats off to the poet

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Savita Tyagi 28 September 2014

Such a wonderful write. Your poems take us on the journey of past. To dreams of youth and innocence of childhood. Of course time is the worst enemy but memories are always by your side and you bring them out with such passion and poetic eloquence. Enjoyed the poem very much.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 28 September 2014

Your description put in front of my eyes seen in many places people itch the name of both or makes two hearts with arrow pinning together, or they will write I love you// a panoramic theme you have created..Oh! the pain of love..not me Tree said....thank you sir

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Amitava Sur 27 September 2014

A beautiful write about the romances in life, specially in youth. but what ever joy and thrill you had and passed through, in the evening of life everybody has to leave the place for others of next generation... very well enjoyed.

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Salini Nair 27 September 2014

Time! Oh my worst enemy! How you dare to de-shape! ..........................awesome write..................like each line.....................

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Valsa George 27 September 2014

The eucalyptus tree stands there having seen many autumns. It still bears the etching of two hearts conjoined with an arrow and two names carved on its bark! It must have been a mute witness to two teenagers sitting in its shsde and weaving dreams about a future, little knowing that such dreams have only a fleeting existence! How many passionate scenes it must have witnessed! Yes, time distorts the shape of love and ruin 'hearts'! Finally when evening sets in, we have to exit out giving space for others! Of course you are in youth.... still time enough to do another round of waltz! ! Greatly enjoyed

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 September 2014

A nice romantic poem with a matured end.

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