Standing By The Sea Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Standing By The Sea

Rating: 5.0

Standing by the sea
watching all emotions flow
like waves upon waves
gently trying to overtake
the time went past and the time to come
making me nostalgic and emotional
as the sun is ready to bow down
and take a dip in now
on my quivering lips those unspoken words
ready to linger once again
and those shut eyes open up again
boat of my life moved on
unaware of the surface below
and flying dreams above.

Tuesday, September 17, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 13 October 2024

Beautifully captured the emotional flow of life, time, and memories! ..

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Sando Hussam 17 September 2024

fantastic, making it picturesque and true painting

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Sando Hussam 17 September 2024

Mind has the power to create the magical painting, this poem reached that level.

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Sandra Feldman 25 October 2024

Full marks and long live nostalgic memories and dreams. Unforgettably sentimental and supreme.

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Sandra Feldman 25 October 2024

words become emotions and emotions transcend words in this dreamlike poem for feelings to be heard. So very lovely and transcendental

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Rob Lamberton 25 October 2024

"emotions flow like waves upon waves"

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 October 2024

Bravo Asim Thank U for this poem

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Rebecca Navarre 13 October 2024

Awesome heart and soul painted into this! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++

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