Wednesday, August 24, 2005

Standing Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

So there i am standing there waiting that endless wait
the wait that drags its drums on empty time and space

you left me there
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Todd Jones
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Mary Nagy 10 January 2006

This is great ''pouring forth pieces of apologies......'' that's a wonderful line. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Diana Newsome 07 December 2005

Drags its drums on empty time....WOW! You convey your thoughts with expertise.

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David Gerardino 24 August 2005

great poem, its the target...............................

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