Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Stand Tall Comments

Rating: 5.0

the leaves change colour as the season
Changes then eventually fall to the
earth as it becomes unbearably cold
The tree stands tall naked and stripped
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brendon khore
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Brendon. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 05 July 2018

Nice write Thulani... I like your focus on this poem.

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Chinedu Dike 16 August 2017

Beautiful poem. Good rendition of words and very realistic description. Focussed and factual. Thanks for sharing Brendon.

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Thulani Khore 08 August 2017

times change for better or for worse but despite the challenges we face we must remain true to ourselves and let go of what mught hold us back

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