~stand Still With Me~~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

~stand Still With Me~~

Rating: 5.0


...Of all the moments, that i could ever savor,
This TIME, it would be spent with you-
Courting our: High Esteem, together,
Dressed up in love, are we two...

You know what i mean don't you?
Someone to: 'Stand Still' in TIME with, in the rain?
Or to braise our naked bodies under the sun,
With SomeOne, to erase, the daily pain?

I do believe that with you-
That the seconds and minutes will show,
That: 'Standing Still' together-
Will make a way, for sweet love to grow!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 31 August 2007

'standing still together...' what a nice feeling!

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Theodora Onken 31 August 2007

Andy, As always, thank you. Your words of encouragement are so appreciated! I do not believe i have read one negative word from you on this site! Blessings and wishes To you and Sarah! Theo

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 August 2007

Reminds me of the song... Has Long as you stand by me.. Theo Great poem Lady

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Theodora Onken 01 September 2007

Joanne, Please, Please, cheer up! Living life, we learn to face and deal with the sad and the mean! Look at the problem i am dealing with! My poem: Famous Yet, identifies my problem...and i still do not allow for it to get me down. Criminals, and their CANT, well, lets just say i turned it over to God, and God turned it over to the authorities. The more he writes, the more they know! Now, i know that you are sad, and i am not sure why, but please, take a moment to breathe and reflect inwardly and then let God! Thank you sweetie for your praise! Love Ya! Theo

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JoAnn McGrath 31 August 2007

This one was a nice one of your poems to start with on my return...wish I could feel that way again...sounds wonderful

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Theodora Onken 31 August 2007

Thank you dear Marci, and Margaret! It can happen for anyone...in reality or in fantasy, as using the imagination sometimes is a good thing. And sometimes if you think about things enough, you find, at least i have that the thoughts, actually do come true! XXOO, Theo

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x... x... 31 August 2007

My oh my now 'wouldn't this be loverly? ' as the song states. Goodness I hope it's happening for you. sometimes, enough of the 'cold spell' say I. [ps>>39 yrs. would have been, only made it through exactly ten] This is a beautiful poem Theodora. ~~marci.xoxo~~

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Margaret Alice 31 August 2007

A love that consists of cameraderie, being buddies, sharing the routine of life, cherishing friendship and confidence - yes, always Theo! 'That: 'Standing Still' together-' Will make a way, for sweet love to grow! ' Lovely sentiments, thank for the expression in this poem; Kind regards, Margaret.

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