Stand In The Rain Comments

I can't change the time I can't change the pain I can change what it takes To Stand in the rain- - - - - - excellent closing lines for a brilliant introspective poem 10+++++++

Impressive! Really impressive Lyn

What matters most? The things we've seen... Beautifully conveyed in the delightful poem.

Try an umbrella! ! ! bri :)

The last four lines are so inspiring! A beautiful poem, just like the flower that comes after it.

Wow a thought provoking soul searching poem to wake us up from materialistic over indulgence. How you creatively say that thinking life is only a material gift is a destructive rift" woah bravo only your bright broad mind can think that way. Kudos for the wonder muse. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

I can't change the time I can't change the pain I can change what it takes To Stand in the rain....outstanding conceptualization. Time can't be changed, but resolve can be changed. A great philosophical poem on life and death has been astutely delineated. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10

good thoughts well-expressed Lyn

Excellent write my friend. I like the flow, the rhythm... and the rhyme. It is also deeply insightful.

Insightful and confronting. At least standing in the rain causes no pain.

Very nice poem, Lyn. I like the second stanza best.