Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, December 7, 2014

Stan Martin Acrostic Comments

Rating: 4.5

Science used to be his game,
Then the library called his name.
And now he sits there in his nook
Nourishing himself with a book.
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Wes Vogler 25 November 2016

Excellent ... you are becoming hooked on rhyming and acrostic.. rhythm falling into place as well. I enjoy clever disciplined writing I think I am going to have to get you drawing.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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