Thursday, March 30, 2017

Staircase Recognition Comments

Rating: 5.0

Someone greeted me at the stoplight last night. I scanned the traffic for the source of voice. I walked past the idling vehicle, did not look closely, spoke the pleasantry 'drop by.'

Twilight does funny things with faces. Her hair so different from an earlier time. I let myself forget a fawn that once had once taken alarm. I had dropped my book off at her workplace, on an awkward whim, but only as fuel for walking. Maybe. I was simply eager to share my words; no intentions were intended.
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Denis Mair
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Bri Edwards 05 January 2018

the left my book part particularly puzzled me. i have an inkling of what this might all mean. the topics section gives me clues. but staircase? did i miss it? oh, probably some symbolism! ! let me peek at another poem here. bri :)

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Denis Mair 10 January 2018

Your question about STAIRCASE prompted me to clarify. See my poet's comment above. As for LEAVING MY BOOK...I signed my poetry book and left it for her (at her workplace) . Later I heard she thought I was acting like a weirdo. I was embarrassed and felt like a fool, so I didn't get in touch with her again. A few weeks later, she greeted me at a traffic light while I was out walking. I didn't know what to say to her. I wasn't TRYING to write obscurely, honest!

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Bri Edwards 05 January 2018

Anomie, also spelled anomy, in societies or individuals, a condition of instability resulting from a breakdown of standards and values or from a lack of purpose or ideals.........thus spake Google! (to be continued) ...

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Denis Mair 05 January 2018

Those guys who write definitions are real wordsmiths. I share your appreciation for what they do. There is so much amazing self-digestion of language in a dictionary! I should put a dictionary next to the toilet, but I'm usually preoccupied.

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Tom Billsborough 31 March 2017

i recognise faces but am terrible with names(not a product of ageing) and my diffident nature hasYou do get often precluded me from following up a surprise encounter with a face from the past. You do get a feeling of regret and self-imposed isolation. It's one of the most interesting poems I've read in a long time, Denis.

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Denis Mair 31 March 2017

I am glad you picked up on the feeling. I used to wonder about the phrase STAIRCASE WIT. When the title of this poem popped into my head, I realized that I already had a tentative understanding. I saw an image of myself: a light bulb coming on in my head as I stood on a stair landing outside of the party of life.

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