Sunday, October 7, 2012

Stair Case Comments

Rating: 5.0

You may have trodden
A lot of steps and
Read a lot of books
On the life of
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Abdul Wahab
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Karen Sinclair 16 October 2012

Exceptional.... there are so many avenues of thought this can lead too... its so hard not to side step just with sheer digging of heels as things did not go the way as we first hoped... in the end both side find they are tangoing from such a distance, we no longer look at each other let alone gaze.... lovely lovely write...tyvm

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Aung Si 08 October 2012

Good job! I really appreciate especially the last two lines.Well done! ! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 07 October 2012

A really wonderful poem, like it.

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Shahzia Batool 07 October 2012

Post this poem on different sites n forums to spread the message of universal bonding...we don't need hatred, we detest terrorism, ...a wonderful poem on your credit- wahab! congrats...

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