Thursday, November 17, 2022

Stains Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every morning I wake up to the same alarm clock,
Every night I sleep with same memories haunting me.
What makes a girl so mature and wise,
Is beyond what everybody could see.
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Miss Grace
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Part 3. It is said "there is no wound that is not healed in time". Against this, your lines " Seems like not all wounds heal, Some stains are permanent." make an agonising experience.

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Part 2. Just gather yourself and make a grim resolution that you are braving the times of challenge. Juxtaposing the line with "I don't wanna sleep" the line "I don't want this night to end" makes a challenging impact.5*s.

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A heart-wrenching episode. I do understand how you feel, because I have gone through nights that I did not want to dawn. But, dear Miss Grace, (though the words may seem empty, they are true) this time too will pass.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 November 2022

Miss Grace I know how it feels Just keep at it and things will get better Bravo! ! ! !

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David Wood 17 November 2022

When you reach bottom the only way is up but you have to find that strength to climb that hill, but you can do it.5*

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