Sunday, August 30, 2009

Stained Comments

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I like it when you smile,
love it when you laugh,
can't stand it when your mad at me,
cry when you have another man.
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Adeline Foster 13 October 2015

great painting in stain. Good idea and it worked. Read mine- Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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good altought you more feelings to this one poem.. i like the reading...you'll get better if you keep writting...good lucky my dear friend

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Tracey Wynn 13 March 2010

Nice poem, its a different read for me. The more you write the better you will become. So I look forward to reading more from you.

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Kassiah Gervaise 12 March 2010

not the best, i've read better.

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its better not to hold on to memories... sometimes they hurt way worse that when it actually happens.

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Aimee Lee 09 March 2010

well, sometimes ur best friends are right inside ur own head...o_O

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Angelic Warrior 30 August 2009

awww that's so cute! and so sweet! ! ! ! ! ! absolutely adorable love it! 10++

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