What wealth for man to fare
The gift of power, the will to dare
Wit so sharp and insights rare
A heart to share and a soul to care
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Beautiful just beautiful. Another deep penetration to the soul, mind and heart. There is one that is greater than you and I. He holds the key to our future and can unlock any door. Great is He our God. Very nice Madam Valsa!
An incomparable poem with beauty and magnificence with music flowing endears the readers. Wonderful, brilliant and amazing!
A beautiful poem with the nature of human and the beauty of divine delightful to heart and mind thank you
Beautifully penned poem. Heart to share and soul to care. What more? Thank you.
Love it and love your skill with rhyme. Beautiful thoughts and deftly presented. Your devoutness comes shining through
Excellent poem! As always I like this too...... I have added a new poem. If you have time gimme feedback
Rich imagery and sentiment to lovingly support devout faith.
Perhaps man is the superior to all and we must care the other fellow living thank
Fantastic poem Valsa. I might have read more than once to get its proper meaning. Here on the earth, he is uncrowned king and legal heir to amass wealth.But at the last where he stands? It's true many of them don't think about that..Its often seems that death is too far away from their view..loved the way you presented it.
But where is his tribe and isn`t he often standing alone? Poor man. We have no magical power to stop his aging and If he is going to be rewarded with the celestial glee later, deep down in his mind he will remain sad like Oscar Wilde`s [un]happy prince! Who will rescue him then? The Designer cannot see that angle. The poem scores high in language used and format applied.
an excellent write........yes God is the ultimate decision maker
when a heart shares pains and smiles of others and his soul really cares it, the owner of that heart becomes a beloved of God...........10