Stability Of Soul Comments

this and the last stanza are my favorites: (to MyPoemList) bri :) If you're impotent to challenge Complain grievance to close friend Or write down words in revenge Poem hunter may area lend ........................... to MyPoemList bri :)

High feelings brain should restrain The spring won't remain too long After azure come heavy rains Which confirm that you was wrong ...i suppose you know were wrong is (more) proper. but i like the alliterations and rhyming. AND i agree that writing out our feelings, happy, sad, etc. can be useful to our minds. PH is helpful! ! (to be continued) ...

Enjoyed the poem, written beautifully. Thanks for sharing.