Thursday, December 7, 2017

Stabbing Within Comments

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Darker the night
deeper the incision
of your embrace
and sharper the knife
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Binayakumar Mohanty
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 December 2017

KABITA SHATAKAM- by SRI BINAYA KUMAR MOHANTY Om Rajivalochanaya Naraharei Sahityyabikasartham Srungarasatakani Rachayitani Swaha. Pranamam Karomiti.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 07 December 2017

Dhanyabadam master garu.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 December 2017

A GREAT CONGRATULATION FOR COMPLETING THE FIRST CENTURY ON THIS SITE. Wishing you a grand Party at the HYATT, New Delhi, on the 25th December,2017 to this effect. Faithfully yours great FAN and SMAALL gun Subhas

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Binayakumar Mohanty 07 December 2017

Thanks sir for I am here because of You.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 December 2017

Wow Sir, the great Devadutta...swans are always shot from a world unknown and whatever valid reason may we have to tag it with, we are helpless foreheads of fortune on which feathers of brightness are added, regardless of our discomfiture. In the fight between the banks of a river called self, we must be the umpires in stead. 10++++ for it. Subhas

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Binayakumar Mohanty 07 December 2017

Thanks sir for brilliant criticism.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2017

My prayer is still unable to find a word for priming a garland- A beautiful poem dear Binaya..thank you for sharing..10

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Binayakumar Mohanty 07 December 2017

Thanks sir for your nice remark.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 December 2017

Binaya, such a fine poem..10+++

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